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New York State Grades 6–8 Wring Evaluaon Rubric
CRITERIA CCLS
SCORE
4
Essays at this level:
3
Essays at this level:
2
Essays at this level:
1
Essays at this level:
0*
Essays at this level:
CONTENT AND ANALYSIS:
the extent to which the essay
conveys ideas and informaon
clearly and accurately in order to
support analysis of topics or text(s)
W.2
R.1–9
—clearly introduce a topic in
a manner that is compelling
and follows logically from
the task and purpose
—demonstrate insighul
analysis of the text(s)
—clearly introduce a topic in
a manner that follows from
the task and purpose
—demonstrate grade-
appropriate analysis of the
text(s)
—introduce a topic in
a manner that follows
generally from the task and
purpose
—demonstrate a literal
comprehension of the
text(s)
—introduce a topic in a
manner that does not
logically follow from the
task and purpose
—demonstrate lile
understanding of the text(s)
—demonstrate a lack of
comprehension of the
text(s) or task
COMMAND OF EVIDENCE:
the extent to which the essay
presents evidence from the
provided text(s) to support
analysis and reecon
W.2
R.1–8
—develop the topic with
relevant, well-chosen
facts, denions, concrete
details, quotaons, or other
informaon and examples
from the text(s)
—sustain the use of varied,
relevant evidence
—develop the topic with
relevant facts, denions,
details, quotaons, or other
informaon and examples
from the text(s)
—sustain the use of relevant
evidence, with some lack of
variety
—parally develop the topic
of the essay with the use
of some textual evidence,
some of which may be
irrelevant
—use relevant evidence
with inconsistency
—demonstrate an aempt
to use evidence, but only
develop ideas with minimal,
occasional evidence which
is generally invalid or
irrelevant
—provide no evidence or
provide evidence that is
completely irrelevant
COHERENCE, ORGANIZATION, AND
STYLE:
the extent to which the essay
logically organizes complex ideas,
concepts, and informaon using
formal style and precise language
W.2
L.3
L.6
—exhibit clear organizaon,
with the skillful use of
appropriate and varied
transions to create a
unied whole and enhance
meaning
—establish and maintain a
formal style, using grade-
appropriate, styliscally
sophiscated language and
domain-specic vocabulary
with a notable sense of
voice
—provide a concluding
statement or secon that
is compelling and follows
clearly from the topic and
informaon presented
—exhibit clear organizaon,
with the use of appropriate
transions to create a
unied whole
—establish and maintain a
formal style using precise
language and domain-
specic vocabulary
—provide a concluding
statement or secon that
follows from the topic and
informaon presented
—exhibit some aempt
at organizaon, with
inconsistent use of
transions
—establish but fail to
maintain a formal style, with
inconsistent use of language
and domain-specic
vocabulary
—provide a concluding
statement or secon that
follows generally from
the topic and informaon
presented
—exhibit lile aempt at
organizaon, or aempts
to organize are irrelevant to
the task
—lack a formal style, using
language that is imprecise
or inappropriate for the
text(s) and task
—provide a concluding
statement or secon that
is illogical or unrelated to
the topic and informaon
presented
—exhibit no evidence of
organizaon
—use language that is
predominantly incoherent
or copied directly from the
text(s)
—do not provide a
concluding statement or
secon
CONTROL OF CONVENTIONS:
the extent to which the essay
demonstrates command of the
convenons of standard English
grammar, usage, capitalizaon,
punctuaon, and spelling
W.2
L.1
L.2
—demonstrate grade-
appropriate command of
convenons, with few errors
—demonstrate grade-
appropriate command of
convenons, with occasional
errors that do not hinder
comprehension
—demonstrate emerging
command of convenons,
with some errors that may
hinder comprehension
—demonstrate a lack of
command of convenons,
with frequent errors that
hinder comprehension
—are minimal, making
assessment of convenons
unreliable
• If the prompt requires two texts and the student only references one text, the response can be scored no higher than a 2.
• If the student writes only a personal response and makes no reference to the text(s), the response can be scored no higher than a 1.
• Responses totally unrelated to the topic, illegible, or incoherent should be given a 0.
• A response totally copied from the text(s) with no original student wring should be scored a 0.
* Condion Code A is applied whenever a student who is present for a test session leaves an enre constructed-response queson in that session completely blank (no response aempted).