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Key to Worksheet 5
Sample Script A Sample Script B
THE INTRODUCTION
1.
Does the introduction tell you
exactly what the topic is?
No, it could be more fully
developed or clearer.
Yes, though the second sentence
introduces a new idea.
2.
Do any of the ideas need
more information?
It is not clear why present
sources of energy will finish.
No.
What connectors have been
used to improve the
cohesion of the paragraph?
None. Which; During these years; but
THE BODY OF THE ESSAY
What benefits of nuclear
technology does the writer
give?
The same as the question +
nuclear technology can help in
the field of medicine and the
engineering sector and nuclear
rays can treat cancer.
No threat of pollution; limitless;
effective for industrial purposes.
Are the benefits given
different to the ones in the
title?
Some are. Yes.
3.
What disadvantages of
nuclear technology does the
writer discuss?
None.
Limited only to a few countries; if
mishandled there is a risk of
contamination to nearby population.
What connectors are used to
link the ideas together?
And; that is why; because; then;
so; though; but; on the other
hand; in conclusion
And; this is due to; since; in fact;
when and if ... then; the following; as
stated before; the advantages are that
...; the disadvantages are that ...; also;
as we all know; it is clear that; in
conclusion; so that
Is there enough evidence to
support the writer’s claims
and ideas?
No. No examples given of
disadvantages; no examples of
how nuclear technology can
help in engineering; can nuclear
rays cure cancer?
Yes.
Do any of the ideas need to
be developed further?
Yes (see above) + why do other
energy sources need ‘large
Perhaps more information about the
‘energy crisis’ and what will cause it.